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List of county routes in Rockland County, New York edit

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I've listed this article for peer review because I want a better idea what can be thrown into it and its sub-articles (1, 2, and 3). Another user, Airtuna08, and I are putting together future FLCs here and could use any improvement ideas you have. We're accepting anything so...

Thanks, ^Mitch32^contribs 22:22, 15 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Dihydrogen Monoxide edit

Just a few random comments.

The bold stuff in the lead (New York, etc.) could be wlinked where relevant.
I'm really not sure how sourcing on these lists normally works
"Most of the routes act as primary roads in the less developed areas and also serve to interconnect the various villages and hamlets of the county." - Could do with a source?
Most of Route articles redirect back to one of this list's subarticles. Are these links necessary?
The tables in the "Statistics" seem to have different colouring to the ones above. Streamlining is good.

As I said, someone with more knowledge about these types of articles may be able to help more. dihydrogen monoxide (H₂0) 22:58, 15 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]