Wikipedia:Peer review/List of Orlando Magic head coaches/archive1

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Gary King (talk) 01:33, 12 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

  • "of the National Basketball Association"-->in the National Basketball Association
  • "the team for 328 games over four seasons" Comparative quantities should be written out the same way.
  • "regular season games"-->regular-season games (multiple occurences)
  • "Stan Van Gundy is the team's current coach, coaching his first game at the beginning of the 2007–08 season."-->Stan Van Gundy has been the team's current coach since the beginning of the 2007–08 season.
  • "regular season winning percentage"-->regular-season winning percentage
  • Can we have a more descriptive image caption?
  • "A running total of the number of coaches of the Pistons." No, the Magic.
  • Ref 1—Are you sure that you retrieved the info in 2060?
  • "Turner Sports Interactive, Inc" is the publisher of the NBA.com refs, see ref 1 List of Washington Wizards head coaches. Dabomb87 (talk) 02:34, 12 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Okay done. The "328" and the "four" aren't being compared; it's "games" vs. "seasons", not "games" vs. "games". Why is the dash needed? It looks a bit strange, too. Gary King (talk) 03:46, 12 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
From WP:MOSNUM "Comparable quantities should be all spelled out or all figures: we may write either 5 cats and 32 dogs or five cats and thirty-two dogs, not five cats and 32 dogs." Do you mean the hyphen? It is used for compound adjectives. Dabomb87 (talk) 13:10, 12 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Okay done Gary King (talk) 15:30, 12 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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