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I've listed this article for peer review to check the content and the quality of the prose.

Regards, Efe (talk) 03:23, 6 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Whataworld06: This looks good, but I have a couple quick/easy suggestions:

  • "digital" links to Digital download, but then re-directs to Digital distribution. Should this be linked to the latter just to avoid confusion?
  • Linked to digital distribution. --Efe (talk) 04:26, 11 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • For the first reference listed at the bottom, I would recommend linking Billboard and Nielsen Business Media, Inc (you can link it to Nielsen Company). This may not be required, but it seems to be fairly common practice and I find it helpful sometimes, as a reader.
  • Linked only the first. --Efe (talk) 04:26, 11 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Umbrella", which occupied seven weeks of summer's 13 weeks, has been credited as 2007's Song of the Summer" by who?
  • Attributed. --Efe (talk) 04:26, 11 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Just because they make the list look nice, a couple additional artist pictures along the side wouldn't hurt. Looks good to me! -Whataworld06 (talk) 18:03, 8 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Added one. I want to add Soulja Boy's image because he's got one of the longest-running singles in this year. However, the only free image of his is not suitable for this list. Thoughts? --Efe (talk) 04:26, 11 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Ruhrfisch comments: A bit delayed, here are my thoughts on the last of the three similar Hot 100 peer review requests and some suggestions for improvement.

  • If you mean the picture of Soulja Boy on the beach, I think it would be OK to add to the article. There is also one of him performing in his article, but I agree it is not a great picture to use (not very clear, not clear even which figure is him).
  • I assume some of the similar comments I made before will apply here. I also did a light copyedit as it was easier than copying the stuff here ;-) . Please revert if I have made arrors along the way. I still had some questions though:
  • No errors introduced. The copy edit was fine. Thanks. --Efe (talk) 13:34, 13 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Watch for Overlinking - Soulja Boy Tell Em is linked twice in one paragraph, did not carefully check all the others.
  • SHould the lead mention that Irreplacable was on the chart a total of 10 weeks (7 this year, 3 in 2006)? It would make this sentence However, "Irreplaceable", which started its pole position in the previous year, is credited to by Billboard magazine as 2006's longest-running single.[3][4] clearer.
  • Copy edited. --Efe (talk) 13:34, 13 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Refs 2, 3, and 4 are identical and should be combined with the <ref name = "blah"> Ref</ref> trick (assume you know this, please ask if not).
  • Otherwise looks fine - good luck with FLC.

Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 22:11, 11 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

  • Thanks for the review. --Efe (talk) 13:34, 13 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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