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List of Asian Australian politicians edit

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I've listed this article for peer review because I think that we have changed this article enough from the previous peer review for featured list status.

Thanks, AverageFraud (talk) 07:28, 25 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Aza edit

Interesting list!
First off, make sure your sources are consistently formatted. Web sources should always have a title, website or publisher and access-date. Authors and dates are also required if available
There are some sections without any citations (the "Parliament of South Australia" section) and some that seems to have too many citations, such as Sally Sitou (see WP:OVERCITE). As a general rule, more than 3 citations is usually too many
In my personal opinion, there are too many things in the See also section, but you may disagree. What I would be more certain about is removing the section headers there. You could have an organizational scheme with bold text, but actual section headers appear in the TOC, which is not really helpful I think
Never start of with "This is a list of ..." — it's obvious to readers. Come up with something more interesting like "Asian Australians have served throughout the Australian government, including in federal, state, or territory legislatures", or something similar. See MOS:FIRST for further information
Consider if you really need a notes section. Most of the entries are empty. Perhaps you can just put notes next to their names? (With something like the {{efn}} template)
If you do have a note section it should be unsortable (using class="unsortable" in the code) Aza24 (talk) 05:04, 12 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Oh wow, I did not get a notification for this. Thanks for the response! I will get onto this soon. AverageFraud (talk) 08:52, 23 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Mcampany would you be able to assist with this? Just some tidy up, I'm not too experienced with these type of changes. AverageFraud (talk) 09:09, 23 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]