I've listed this article for peer review because I want to see if there is anymore changes I need to do to this article before I nominate this article as a Good Article.
Thanks, Lazman321 (talk) 00:49, 2 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Updated infobox as per TEMPLATE:Infobox song – easier than listing here. Couple of quick ones: Song lyrics and quoted statements use "quote marks" instead of italics; "Synopsis" section is almost entirely unsourced and appears to be original research; "In popular culture" entries do not appear to meet WP:SONGTRIVIA. —Ojorojo (talk) 13:41, 2 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Done. I have removed the pop culture section, added citations to the synopsis section, and removed the italics. I did one extra thing and expanded the background section. Anything else. Lazman321 (talk) 16:51, 2 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Didn't mean to give the impression that all uses of italics should be removed – album titles (Taking Up Your Precious Time), radio programs (Essentil Mix), magazine and newspaper titles (Billboard, El Correo), etc. use italics. I noticed several other potential MOS/style issues, which I'm not particularly good at, such as one- and two-sentence paragraphs, use of ellipses, etc. I don't want to give any bad advice – sometimes the Guild of Copy Editors is helpful for improving articles (requests). Also, some of the sources/links may be problematic: YourEDM, Twitter, Instagram, Facebook, iTunes (see WP:NOTRSMUSIC). Good luck! —Ojorojo (talk) 17:58, 2 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
