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I've listed this article for peer review because I want some input from editors other than the small few who edit this article. My goal is for this to be a featured list.
Thanks, 3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 18:37, 1 August 2019 (UTC)
Some brief comments from Naray14
Appears to be thoroughly cited with a good variety of industry references and media outlets. List is comprehensive and accurate. No 'resume' links from the artist which is a big plus.
One issues that may just be a personal preference of mine, but I like to see a citation with the first paragraph of any article.
I have seen that reference '5' links to an unavailable page. I don't have enough time in what's left of my life to check them all, maybe you do :)
(Naray14 (talk) 15:59, 30 August 2019 (UTC))
- Do you think the first paragraph needs a source, since it is summarizing material that is already cited throughout the article? I'll fix reference "5". Thanks for the review.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 15:26, 3 September 2019 (UTC)
- I don't think it necessarily needs one considering the nature of the article and that the information at the start is cited later on, but I can see the edit you made and I think for me, I prefer that. Naray14 (talk) 18:59, 3 September 2019 (UTC)
- You're welcome. Looking over the lead, I realized that the first paragraph was so short, it would be better to merge it with the next one.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 21:36, 3 September 2019 (UTC)
- I don't think it necessarily needs one considering the nature of the article and that the information at the start is cited later on, but I can see the edit you made and I think for me, I prefer that. Naray14 (talk) 18:59, 3 September 2019 (UTC)