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My reason for requesting a peer review is so that I can add this article to the already established Good Topic Video games developed by Key, and as such an "individual quality audit that includes a completed peer review, with all important problems fixed" is needed before I propose this article's addition in that GT. Thanks.--十八 03:07, 31 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Images needs alt text as per WP:ALT. RB88 (T) 16:17, 6 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The article seems fine. I've copyedited it and it should be OK now. Having gone through the FTC process myself, I'm wondering if it's too early to add it as the release date is summer 2010. But if all they want is a peer review, then you have it. Keep adding material as it comes. I don't think there's much more anyone can do here at PR. RB88 (T) 16:40, 6 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

- Well, Rewrite was added last October, and that game has yet to even have a tentative release date, not to mention that the retention periods of FTs/GTs are set up for just the purpose of giving editors a chance to improve an article to FA/GA within a given time. Thanks for the copyedit.--十八 19:02, 6 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]