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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd appreciate suggestions for how to improve the article in light of the available sources. Should the structure be changed? Is there any chance of this passing a GAN given the lack of available sources?

Thanks, TJMSmith (talk) 01:47, 3 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Username6892

I think a couple of things should definitely be addressed:

The book cited in ref 4 is very broad, so citing relevant page numbers is a good idea.
There are a couple of clarification needed tags. If you feel these have been addressed, you should remove them.

--Username⁶⁸⁹² 04:29, 7 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]