Wikipedia:Peer review/KaDee Strickland/archive1

KaDee Strickland edit

I've been working away at this article in its corner of Wikipedia over the past couple of months, and have included information on the actress's roles in the films she has been in, quotes from critics reviewing her work as well from as the actress herself, and images that relate to the accompanying sections in the article. However, nobody else has touched the article (apart from minor edits), and I would really appreciate the opinions of people here on what they think of the article in the state it is in now, and what they think could be done to improve it. Thank you in advance. Extraordinary Machine 03:26, 23 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

The references seem a bit extreme; e.g. it is unlikely that a review of The Sixth Sense really has much to say about her role as Visitor #5. You might want to prune that list to highlight the works that actually served as major sources for the article text. Christopher Parham (talk) 06:41, 2005 August 24 (UTC)
- Thank you for your comments. I wanted to make sure every statement in the article was supported by a reference, especially weasel terms such as saying that The Sixth Sense got good reviews and Anacondas was panned by critics. According to WP:NPOV#A_simple_formulation and WP:AWT, statements like those should only be used if they are backed up by a source, which they are. Since there hasn't been a great deal written about this actress yet (at least in one place), I obtained the information that I used in the article from many different places. Once again, thank you. Extraordinary Machine 13:49, 24 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]
I would appreciate any further comments from anybody regarding the state of the article and how it could be improved. Thanks in advance. Extraordinary Machine 17:09, 27 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]
I'm about to nominate the article at WP:FAC, so I'm archiving this request. Extraordinary Machine 02:06, 30 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]