Wikipedia:Peer review/Japanese invasions of Korea (1592-1598)/archive1

Japanese invasions of Korea (1592-1598) edit

Requesting comments and suggestions on the overall article and also suggestions to organize and make the article look better. Thank you for your time and comments. Good friend100 23:56, 21 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

You need to tread carefully on issues like this, because unfortunately a lot of people take Asian history very seriously and personally, and tend to take offense at the slightest slight, often even when it's unintentional. This goes doubly so where Japan is involved. However, from what I can see here, to my Western eyes, this seems more or less without POV, and with enough detail to be comprehensive. I think it's probably at about the upper limit of how long it should be though. Lankiveil 03:43, 22 March 2007 (UTC).[reply]

So is there anything POV going on the article that I should change? thanks again. Good friend100 03:45, 22 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

A lot of the wording is awkward. It reads as if it was written by a non-native English speaker. The article could use an English-language edit. I did not get all the way through the article, but it appears to be very informative.imars 19:29, 23 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! I'll run through the article and make the neccesary grammer edits.

Are there any problems concerning POV issues?

Is the article organized correctly?

Is the article ready for FA status, and if not why?

Thank you again for the comments. I really appreciate the help. Good friend100 23:31, 23 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]