Wikipedia:Peer review/Golden Film/archive1

Golden Film edit

I believe the Golden Film article is written in good prose and proper detail. I would like to use this peer review to receive some feedback before renominating the article as a featured article candidate. Previously, the article was not promoted due to the fact that nobody voted or commented after the featured article director restarted the nomination. Thank you for your help. – Ilse@ 17:00, 10 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

  • A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style. If you would find such a review helpful, please click here. Thanks, APR t 02:39, 11 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]
I changed the two occurrences of "didn't" into "did not", as suggested in the automated review. – Ilse@ 12:30, 11 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]