Wikipedia:Peer review/Fundamental Rights, Directive Principles and Fundamental Duties of India/archive3

Fundamental Rights, Directive Principles and Fundamental Duties of India edit

This is on PR for an unprecedented 3rd time (1 | 2). Since the last PR, it has undergone substantial change, not in the content, but in the style of writing and summary. Please give your comments on how it can be imrpoved. --May the Force be with you! Shr e shth91 ^{(review me!)} 15:36, 10 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The most glaring thing I see is that the whole section "Critical analysis" has no citation at all except a silly one to the Jessica Lal case. Unless you cite it, it is incredibly POV. In general, I see a dearth of citations. You have obviously taken the effort to get all this stuff from somewhere. Why not cite the source? — Ravikiran 17:32, 11 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

You wouldn't say there was a dearth of citations on the rest of the page now would you? I'll be look ing into the critical analysis section soon.--May the Force be with you! Shr e shth91 ^{(review me!)} 15:42, 22 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Done! --May the Force be with you! Shr e shth91 ^{(review me!)} 11:08, 27 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]