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I'm putting this article here for a review because though I'm done with my article. However, I would prefer an article review or nothing, as I have a one-way view, and would like some more support or any assistance in sources/grammar issues
Thanks, J-Man11 (talk) 02:17, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
Comments by Z1720
editHi J-Man11, I am sorry that it has taken so long to get a review for this. There is great information in the article, but the sourcing is a huge concern. Typically, a Wikipedia article would have a citation at the end of every paragraph (except the WP:LEDE), as a minimum, and a some even have a citation after every sentence. I suggest you add citations to help readers verify the information. If you want additional comments, please ping me once the above is complete. Z1720 (talk) 00:51, 22 October 2021 (UTC)
- It has been a while yes, I'll work on it when I get the chance. I know a lot of the citations are missing because it was transferred from the old Grande Armée page. But I do have refs for everything, and expanding on some things too. J-Man11 (talk) 18:09, 22 October 2021 (UTC)
- @J-Man11: I suggest closing this PR and working on adding citations to the article and expanding the lede. Once these are complete, you can re-list this article at PR for more comments. Z1720 (talk) 17:42, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
- Yes, that would be perfect. Thank you, sorry for the delay I just got done with midterms and haven't had a huge amount of time to work on the article sorry. J-Man11 (talk) 17:49, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
- That's OK, real life is more important than Wikipedia. I'll close this for you now. Z1720 (talk) 18:02, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
- Yes, that would be perfect. Thank you, sorry for the delay I just got done with midterms and haven't had a huge amount of time to work on the article sorry. J-Man11 (talk) 17:49, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
- @J-Man11: I suggest closing this PR and working on adding citations to the article and expanding the lede. Once these are complete, you can re-list this article at PR for more comments. Z1720 (talk) 17:42, 31 October 2021 (UTC)