Wikipedia:Peer review/Forbidden Zone/archive1

Forbidden Zone edit

I completely revamped this article. Major, major changes have been made. A previous revision of the article has been described as being more like "a glowing review of the movie, not an encyclopedia article about it." I have fixed this. I think the current revision is very well-done, and I'd like to know what you folks think of what I've done with the article. (Ibaranoff24 05:28, 22 August 2006 (UTC))[reply]

A fairly good article, but the following changes should be implemented:

In-line citations go after the punctuation (here they come exclusively before).

Expand the lead and the Response subsection. Better yet, make Response into a new section by itself.

There are some red links. You might want to create some stubs for these guys (though not all) to make the article look more visually appealing.

The Plot section does not have any in-line citations, although I'm debating if this is a problem. The information included there does not seem to be controversial or something that might need to be sourced, with the possible exception of some quotes I found. I'll let you make the call on this one.

Overall though, nice start.UberCryxic 14:56, 22 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

It looks better now that you've corrected the above problems, however the pictures need some work:

The pic captioned "Frenchy goes into the Forbidden Zone" is appearing (at least in my browser--IE) offset to the right, next to another image.
There are too many pictures in the history section. Consider removing 2-3 of them.

Nice work. SoberEmu 20:30, 22 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]