Wikipedia:Peer review/Extreme ironing/archive1

Any advice for this article? -- Zanimum 15:10, 10 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]


A few things come to mind after a read:

  • The image copyright status needs to be sorted out. Ask for permission for the image to be released under a free license, or seek another image under a free license.
  • All references to media articles (The Guardian, etc) should be cited.
  • What are the criticisms of extreme ironing? The article seems weighted towards praising it.
  • How about more on the Extreme Ironing Bureau and the breakaway Urban Housework. Is this a big rivalry? Also need more general information about the EIB. When did it form?
  • What is the Rowenta Trophy? Who sponsors it? Why is it important? — WiseKwai 19:30, 10 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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