Wikipedia:Peer review/Evansville, Indiana/archive1
Evansville, Indiana edit
looking for some direction on how to improve this article. let me know what you think is missing, needs improvement, or any other ideas you have. thanks! Randella 18:24, 12 November 2006 (UTC)
- Delete and/or incoprorate trivia into the article. No footnotes? Stubby section needs expansion. - Tutmosis 01:59, 13 November 2006 (UTC)
- thanks to both for your feedback. haven't had time to review all the automated suggestions, but will review it in detail. also will go ahead and work on integrating the best of the trivia section into the article. although there are 'inline' reference sources, i'll work to make those actual footnotes so the sources are better documented. Randella 02:56, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
- Indeed, you have the footnotes, but they should be listed in the article itself. You'll need a reference section to list the books, articles and wesbites you used and then a notes section with specific information for each citation. See WP:CITE. If you have any questions feel free to ask. *Exeunt* Ganymead | Dialogue? 15:46, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
- This is a fine start to this article. Here's what you should do to improve it:
- Compare this with a few similar Featured Articles such as Ann Arbor, Michigan, Boston, Massachusetts, Louisville, Kentucky and Seattle, Washington. Look for sections that this article may be missing as well as what information is included in each section.
- The lead should be expanded to summarize the article, see WP:Lead.
- Should you need any help, please let me know, I'll do what I can. Cheers! *Exeunt* Ganymead | Dialogue? 15:57, 14 November 2006 (UTC)