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Eric Brewer (ice hockey) edit

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I started minorly working on this article about two years ago, but over the past year have really put my focus into making it a top-quality Wikipedia article. I'm confident that a review of this article will help me in sucessfully bringing this article to featured article standards.

Thanks, – Nurmsook! (talk) 08:24, 17 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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To be honest, the work you've done on this article has suprised me completely. I didn't know this was being done at all. That being said, I like what I see. But I think it still needs quite some work to get to FA. In terms of references, wow. That is good to see, and will go far in any ruther work. The international section is also extensive. However, there is a lack of content in regard to his NHL career, which only includes three paragraphs for three teams. While not entirely familiar with Brewer as a player, I would think there could be at least three for the Oilers, knowing how good he was with them, and two for both the Islanders and Blues. If possible, it wouldn't hurt to convert the awards section to prose, although that isn't entirely needed. Maybe some information on his style of play, as in offensive or defensive defenceman; I follow hockey, and have no idea what type of defenceman Brewer is, so think about someone who's never followed hockey before. Finally, you got to find a better image of Brewer. I know when I was working on the Joe Sakic article, it got negative response for having the back of Sakic. While it is difficult to find such images, but put up a request for it, and search for it, you will find it.

In conclusion, its a great start, but needs more information before you will pass an FA nomination. Good luck on the article, I look forward to seeing what gets done with it. Nice to see such a high quality article on a player who is quite frankly, not a major star. Hope this helps you on your way. Kaiser matias (talk) 07:37, 18 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]