Wikipedia:Peer review/Emergency management/archive1

Emergency management edit

This article has undergone a vast re-write as a result of WikiProject Disaster Management. Comments on the clarity of the article, its comprehensiveness, as well as any other comments on it would be appreciated. -- backburner001 16:04, 10 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I went through and took out a few extra words for ease of reading. A few things:

Stick to either American or British spellings...but not both.
Just my personal peeve...I am not a big fan of this footnoting style...the footnotes show up simply as a number and the same number is repeated over and over...I find it hard to figure out if it is footnote 1, "a", "b" or "f"...If possile, itemize each footnote if from the same article by differentiating it by a page number as taken from the reference source...this means more article text is taken up by the reference, but at least they'll be in order numerically as they appear in the article.
Work on a minor expansion of other countries adding those that maybe deal with many emergencies...Japan, comes to mind with both Typhoons and earthquakes.--MONGO 11:08, 17 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]