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I've listed this article for peer review because, it have had gone under major constructive edits from 2016. After experienced editors gave me some suggestions, I'll correct/add them and will submit this article to GA nomination.

Thanks, IM3847 (talk) 14:33, 29 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

There are some issues I found while reading this article.

Per the manual of style the lead should summarize everything in this article so I would suggest expand it to at least two paragraphs.
Avoid small sections (for example: Etymology only has two sentences).
There are times when tables and images clash with the text. Try rearranging them
Notable personalities is unsourced.
Some references need formatting.

Anyway, good luck with the article. If possible, would you comment on my peer review? Cheers.Tintor2 (talk) 19:51, 30 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Tintor2: I'm sorry, I haven't seen this till date, I would have reviewed Sasuke article as a anime lover. Pardon me.--IM3847 (talk) 05:47, 24 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]