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Edward Mitchell Bannister edit

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I recently improved Edward Mitchell Bannister's article up to GA status. I would like to propose it for FA, but another editor suggested a peer review beforehand. In particular, I'd love to hear other editors' opinions/criticism of the existing section on Bannister's art style.

Thanks, —Wingedserif (talk) 00:30, 16 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

General comments from Thrakkx edit

Per WP:MOSALT, all images in the article should have an appropriate alt text for accessibility reasons.
The categories at the bottom should be in alphabetical order with numbers listed first.
I think the tag {{Use American English}} should be added to the article to avoid confusion in the future. It seems that the article is written in American English already (e.g. I see "color" and "center" in the article rather than "colour" and "centre")
I replaced mentions of "c" and "ca." in the article to c., and rewrote one mention to the full prose "circa."

Thrakkx (talk) 21:51, 3 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Done, thanks so much for the comments! —Wingedserif (talk) 16:31, 4 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]