Edward Hewitt Nichols edit
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I have recently translated this article and would like to receive some feedback on it to improve the article and my content editing skills. Some copy editing has already been done. I am also considering nominating the article for GA. ~ Aselestecharge-paritytime 11:47, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
Comments by Chidgk1 edit
Some suggestions:
If you can do so without removing important cites shorten the Chinese bibliography a little
Unlink almost all the redlinks
Looks promising for GA - suggest you submit it for GA as soon as you close this peer review as often there is a long wait for review and you can continue to improve it meantime.
If you have time it would be great if you could you write a word or two on Wikipedia:Peer review/Greenhouse gas emissions by Turkey/archive3