Wikipedia:Peer review/Dylan Field/archive1

Dylan Field edit

I've listed this article for peer review because it's only my third biography of a living person and I'd love advice on how to improve!

Specific help wanted:

  1. How good (or bad) is the WP:NPOV right now, and how could it improve?
  2. Is the amount of attributed statements and quotes in the current article OK? How could it improve?

Thanks, Shrinkydinks (talk) 11:35, 3 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I am closing this PR because it has been open since January and the editor has not edited since March. A new PR can be opened by another editor or upon Shrinkydinks's return. Z1720 (talk) 04:19, 29 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]