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I've listed this article for peer review because… I would like an honest assessment of this article's current class-rating as well as what could be done to improve it (though I have not been able to find any further sources than the those currently used).

Thanks, The Ghost of Art Toys Past (talk) 13:47, 26 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@The Ghost of Art Toys Past: I have checked the whole article. Would you check Basshunter article in return? List of issues:

1. Lead should be extended. Eurohunter (talk) 22:49, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

2. "The Dhampire series was intended to continue beyond this one-shot graphic novella, but as of 2022 there have been no further stories published due to several problematic circumstances." - so Dhampire: Stillborn is oner of Dhampire series or it's not directly related series? Eurohunter (talk) 22:49, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

3. "she'd" - abbreviations Eurohunter (talk) 22:49, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

4. "who asked if she'd be interesting in writing a "Gothic" graphic novel" - why Gothic in quotation marks? Eurohunter (talk) 22:49, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

5. "As of 2022, no new Dhampire comic books have been published." - this sense is going to be updated every year? Eurohunter (talk) 22:49, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

6. No reviews or any reception? Eurohunter (talk) 22:49, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

7. "Collins, Nancy A. (February 13, 2013). "Nancy Collins on Exploring Cajun Culture and Breaking Up Swamp Thing's Family". Hasslein Blog (Interview). Interviewed by Rich Handley. New York, NY: Hasslein Books. Archived from the original on March 24, 2022. Retrieved March 24, 2022." - you add "author of article" so exactly credited "author of interview" no who was interviewed or by who. "Hasslein Blog (Interview)." so it's "Hasslein Blog" or "Hasslein Blog (Interview)" (really?)? Eurohunter (talk) 22:49, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

8. I don't think division of references is good idea or how article can benefit from such solution. Just add full references in one section. Eurohunter (talk) 22:49, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

9. Links to redirects. See Help:Link color. Eurohunter (talk) 22:49, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]