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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get it to good article status. I will nominate this for FAC sometime soon.

Thanks, Davest3r08 >:) ^(talk) 23:55, 24 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments after a quick skim:

"In August 2018 Nike, Inc. used the track "Genesis" in an advertisement for the launch of a football boot." Needs a citation. Not done Might remove that altogether because it's trivia. Davest3r08 >:) ^(talk) 17:24, 15 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ref 31 has an error Done Davest3r08 >:) ^(talk) 17:24, 15 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The first paragraph of the "Reception" section falls into the "X says Y" pattern. See WP:RECEPTION on how to improve this writing. Done

That's all I have. Z1720 (talk) 14:59, 15 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]