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Cold Feet (series 5)

This is the first article on an individual series/season I've written and I'm just keen to see what the general mood is of it before I create articles for the other four series. I've compared it with similarly-structured articles and basically cannibalised the official companion and documentaries on the series to get production information. I dispensed with Template: Episode list as it didn't look good with only four episodes in the list (plus the longer summaries due to longer running time made the "short summary" field moot). Brad 11:17, 1 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.^[?]
If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.^[?]
Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -   between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 6ft, use 6 ft, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 6 ft.^[?]
The script has spotted the following contractions: doesn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.^[?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Davnel03 12:07, 1 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I've fixed the contractions, though I can't see any units of measurement that need a nbsp (unless % counts). The article is currently under 15,000 characters so the one-paragraph lead should be OK for now. Brad 15:45, 1 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]