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I've listed this article for peer review because I wish to improve this article to FL-status and would like input on what needs to be changed for it to reach that status.

Thanks, Toa Nidhiki05 01:17, 21 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • It would be nice to have an image in the infobox.
    • Done
  • "The album has sold 1.7 million copies in the United States since its release" No need to link United States.
    • Done
  • "sold a total of 167,000 copies in its first week, debuting at number four on the Billboard 200.." Avoid the double full stop.
    • Corrected
  • "Casting Crowns has also released a Christmas album, Peace on Earth, and four live albums," You already mentioned in the first sentence that they have four live albums.
    • Done
  • Link RIAA and mention it as Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA).
    • Done
      • Once again you've added the double full stop. Oz talk 22:54, 22 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
        • Whoops, fixed
  • Why are you only using the scope format for the tables in the Albums section? Use one format for all tables.
    • Is it fine now?
      • You havent used the scope format in the Singles, Holiday singles, Music videos and Other appearances tables yet. Oz talk 22:54, 22 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
        • What exactly is the scope format?
          • ! scope="col"| and ! scope="row"| – just like you used in the Albums table. Oz talk 23:06, 22 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
            • Alrighty, fixed
  • Singles table needs fixing.
    • Fixed?
      • The Certifications column in the "Just Another Birthday" row needs fixing.
  • At the bottom of the Singles table where it says "denotes releases that did not chart", could you add that to the Live releases table.
    • Done
  • Notes can have its own section (above References section).
    • Done
  • Theres a lot of WP:OVERLINK in the Music videos and Other appearances tables.
    • I did that because they needed citations; the Eminem discography page is an example of an FL-class using links to verify such things
      • I meant there are some songs in those tables that have already been linked in the Singles tables. Oz talk 03:38, 23 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
        • I did that because I assume it can be linked once per section.
  • All dashes in the references section need fixing.
    • Fixed
  • Everything in the references section can be wikilinked (except when multiple refs are used in a single ref [e.g. #23]).
    • Done
  • Refs – Allmusic should not be in italics.
    • Fixed
  • Why are some refs shown as Retrieved February 18, 2012 and Retrieved 18 February 2012? Please fix this.
    • Fixed
  • Use the cite news template for ref #7.
  • Ref #9 – mention the publisher as Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA).
    • Fixed
  • Ref #15 – Jesus Freak Hideout should not be in italics.
    • Done
  • Ref #16 – Amazon.com should not be in italics.
    • Done
  • Use the cite web template for ref #24.
    • Done
  • Use the cite video template for the YouTube refs.
    • Done
  • Refs #27, #30, #36 and #45 need fixing.
    • Done
  • Remove all caps from refs #32, #33, #35, #36, #37, #39, #40, #41, #42, #43, #44, #46, #47, #48, #50, #51.
    • Fixed
  • It would be nice to have an External links section that includes links to the band's official website and allmusic page.
    • Done

Oz talk 12:48, 22 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I think I've fixed all the issues you've addressed. Toa Nidhiki05 00:31, 23 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

More

  • Use the cite web template for refs #4, #5 and #17. (Note: Always use citation templates)
    • Done

Oz talk 03:38, 23 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

More comments

  • The numbers in the infobox, the lead and the tables are different for the amount of albums and singles.
  • Is there any info about the music video directors?
    • I might be able to, if I go out and buy all their live albums, find a few if I am lucky. It is incredibly hard to find information on directors for Christian music videos, mainly due to a lack of coverage of Christian music videos (even in Christian circles, even). Toa Nidhiki05 16:32, 26 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • The Peace on Earth paragraph in the lead should be combined with the prior one.
  • "...one of which was found by..." - Err, do you mean discovered?
  • "...Miller, a country music musician." -> country musician
  • Specify the albums at the top of the 'Albums' section are studio albums.
  • Rename the level 3 headers from 'Live releases' to 'Live albums and so on.
  • The notes at the bottom need citations.
    • For the chart positions or the "measures the top twenty-five singles that have not yet reached the Hot 100" bit? If it is the former, that is cited already. If it is the latter, I can add it, but I do not think the concept fails WP:CHALLENGE since it is widely understood as such. Toa Nidhiki05 16:32, 26 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oh, okay. What a pro (talk, contribs) is on fire. 09:07, 28 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

What a pro (talk, contribs) is on fire. 06:30, 26 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Closure

  • If nobody else has anything to bring up or note, I'll go ahead and close this. Thanks to both of you for your input - it was valuable and helpful. :) Toa Nidhiki05 20:19, 26 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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