Wikipedia:Peer review/Careers Scotland Space School/archive1

Careers Scotland Space School edit

I need to know whether or not the picure is ok, and what other information people think would improve the article. Toepoke 13:36, 18 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The picture seems fine to me, what specifically are you concerned about?

As for the article, it's a great start. It already gives a basic outline of what the Space School is (with in-line references and everything!), now it needs a bit of expanding. Here are some questions to get you started; maybe you'll think of more information that could be added while you're answering these.

What is the history of the program? When was it started? What did people go through in the process of creating it? Has it always been a government program, or did someone else start it first, and then convinced the government to sponsor it?
What prompted the connection with NASA, rather than staying within Scotland/the UK, or working with another country's space organization(s)?
Are there any key people of the Scottish Executive that are responsible for the program, or people outside the Executive? What do they do?
Does it have a central location, or just the University for summer school?
What age range is it for? If it's been around for long enough, have any previous students moved on to have notable careers in any of the areas the program covers?

Hope that helps! -Bbik^★ 18:09, 18 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

In fact, summarized versions of much of the information given in the earliest incarnations of the article would do well to be added back in, too. Admittedly, it was poorly written and sounded too much like a sales pitch, but it was still informative. -Bbik^★ 15:08, 19 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]