Wikipedia:Peer review/Burbank, Los Angeles County, California/archive1
I am requesting a peer review of this article so that it can eventually be considered for a featured article. --Hetar 00:18, 19 February 2006 (UTC)
- Several things. Depending on screen resolution, the "The City of Burbank" heading may be uncomfortably squeezed between the Dependencia picture and the fact table on the right. I recommend moving the picture down or using the picture clearing tag, <br style="clear:both"; />.
- Also, in "Burbank Today", the second word should not be capitalised, otherwise it may be assumed to refer to a newspaper or other news-related media. "Looking east over Burbank" image should be placed on right-hand side, otherwise it breaks up text flow in an uncomfortable way. You should also consider the use of inline or footnote citations.
- The layout further suffers from having too many short paragraphs, especially in the middle section from 1940s to Disney. Please consider joining some of them together into longer ones. - Samsara contrib talk 18:30, 19 February 2006 (UTC)
- In fact, the bulleted list under "Economy" would look better converted to prose. That would also avoid the visual break created by the combination of the list and the picture. - Samsara contrib talk 14:28, 20 February 2006 (UTC)