Wikipedia:Peer review/Boris Johnson Is a Fucking Cunt/archive1

I've listed this article for peer review because I wish to get promoted to featured article status, and indeed for the article to appear on the main page - again (it has been a DYK? and is currently a GA). I admit that I do like the idea of an article entitled "Boris Johnson Is a Fucking Cunt" to appear on Wikipedia's main page. I'm not entirely sure which bits need improving before it should be put up as a candidate.

Thanks, ISD (talk) 17:59, 12 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Comments from mujinga

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  • Overall this article seems to be in pretty good shape
  • Not sure about "aftermath" as the name of the last section?
  • In order to flesh this out as a featured article, you could consider giving a bit more info on Kunt and the Gang. And also who did get the xmas number 1 in 2021? (a question i thought i would never ask)
  • "All money made from sales from the single will go": thats past tense now
  • Music Week can be linked
  • As can all instances of Billboard
  • "Cassetteboy again supported him, releasing a mash-up video of Johnson performing to "Killing in the Name" by Rage Against the Machine with a message to support the stream.[36]" - it would be nice to have a better source here. You can probably argue in favour of beyondthejoke.co.uk but it appears to be a blog
  • For the rest the source seem pretty good
  • Best of luck with the article Mujinga (talk) 00:12, 14 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@ISD: to ensure that they saw the above. Z1720 (talk) 02:14, 28 December 2022 (UTC)\[reply]

Commments from Eurohunter

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@ISD: Just checked the article and I did minor fixes. Would you review song "Fest i hela huset" in return? List of issues of found:

@ISD: It has been over a month since comments were posted above. Are you still working on these, or can we close this PR? Z1720 (talk) 20:15, 4 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Feel free to close. ISD (talk) 10:16, 6 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]