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I would like to request a peer review on this article. It has failed for GA status twice. The second GA fail review gave a helpful list of improvements. Having acted on some of them, I would like a fellow editor to read over some of the sections under "Career";
- 1976–78: The World Starts Tonight and Natural Force
- 1979–81: Diamond Cut and Goodbye to the Island
- 1991–94: Success in Europe
- 1995–99: Free Spirit, All in One Voice and decline.
I am attempting to apply a more narrative and fluid approach to writing the article, which used to read very disjointedly.
I would be so grateful if someone could help out.
Thanks, Bonnietylersave (talk) 12:29, 18 March 2015 (UTC)