Wikipedia:Peer review/Auburn High School/archive1

I'd like to get this article up to FA quality, so it needs a good rigorous scrubbing to get the blemishes out. Particularly, I'd like comments concerning any deviations from the Manual of Style, any NPOV issues, any comprehensiveness/summary style concerns, and any parts that are poorly worded or otherwise need copyediting. Previous discussion on this article, including comments during the article's GA nomination, are on the article's talk page. -- Lissoy 00:48, 19 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan 16:45, 25 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I've made some of the requested changes:
  • Single years are all unlinked, decades remain linked.
  • All images have concise captions except for the school logo in the infobox, which seems to be standard in FA's.
  • I have replaced the gallery with a table of images, as is used in side-by-side images in the FA El Greco.
  • ToC has been condensed from 34 lines to 23 lines.
  • All spaces between punctuation and footnotes have been removed.
Would you suggest any further changes to meet the autopeer suggestions? I'd welcome any other comments on what needs to be improved in this article to reach FACR. Thanks! -- Lissoy 21:00, 25 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]