Atlantic College edit
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I've listed this article for peer review as it has had substantial revisions and additions (by many different editors) since being assessed as Start-class in the schools (high-importance), education (mid-importance), and Wales categories 8+ years ago. Would appreciate any pointers to how best to improve the article, and external eyes to highlight where there might be gaps in the content. (ps - not sure what the best "topic" is for this peer review; an educational institution seems to feel loosely within "Social sciences and society" but happy to adjust if there's a better home for it, or if it would be better off in the general list.)
Thanks, Dotx3 (talk) 21:45, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments by Z1720 edit
Hi Dotx3, I am sorry that it has taken so long for someone to comment on this article. Here are some suggestions, based on a quick skim:
- Each paragraph should end in a citation to verify the preceeding information.
- Ref 5 is for a Wikipedia page. Wikipedia should never be used as a citation in Wikipedia articles.
- The notable alumni and students section is too long. I suggest trimming out the less-important people.
- The second paragraph in Academics needs citations.
- The second paragraph in College needs citations.
- "Students from over 90 countries participate in Atlantic College's rigorous two-year programme" Delete rigorous, as that is subjective.
Once these are addressed, please ping me and I will add additional comments. If you are concerned that you might be missing information, I suggest looking at featured articles about schools, such as Texas A&M University. Z1720 (talk) 18:15, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
- Dotx3 are you still interested in fixing up this article, or do you want to close this PR? Z1720 (talk) 14:57, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
- @Z1720: I think I've fixed up the issues listed above and a handful of additional things (Among other things, I cut down the alumni list significantly, but - would you suggest trimming further?). I would welcome any further PR suggestions. Dotx3 (talk) 15:13, 30 November 2021 (UTC)