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I'm not experienced at working on lists, especially ones like this. Any comments that can help me improve it to a FL would be greatly appreciated. - Shudde ^talk 05:56, 4 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

SGGH

Per WP:MOS I am fairly certain that it is advised not to wikilink the bold text in the lead.
The lead needs some citations, particularly "they have a poor world cup record compared to competing teams..." and the sentence that follows that about ranking.
A cite to the 2007 score against France would also be useful
The position section, is it possible to include who knocked them out (when they didnt win) and what the score was? And perhaps the venue? Certainly I think there should probably be a dash between the year and the position.
Obviously you will need a notes section to include the citations Italked about above.
I'm not sure of the layout of each year being 1987 with the link to that world cup right underneath it, but I can't think of a better way of doing it either to be honest.

Hope those comments help! SGGH ^speak! 12:02, 16 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]