Wikipedia:Peer review/30 Rock (season 4)/archive1

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review to deal with issues at Wikipedia:Featured topic removal candidates/Seasons of 30 Rock/archive1. I've already FLC'ed (and it's nearly done) 30 Rock (season 3), and with Season 4 now underway I want to get this article up to snuff so it can be more easily maintained.

Thanks, Staxringold talkcontribs 15:13, 29 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Rambo's Revenge (talk · contribs)
  • Has there not been any form of release about how many episodes this season is going to have?
  • Summaries 3 & 4 use "TGS" is that meant to be ''TGS'' (giving TGS)
  • Episode 1 is copyvio of IGN
  • Episode 2 is copyvio of NYT
  • Episode 3 is copyvio of IGN
  • Episode 4 is copyvio of Yahoo!TV
  • These need to be your own words, all these copyvios are probably based on the releases from NBC, and as such will have an element of teasers in them. We don't care about spoilers, so for example "faces a more personal issue" should never exist, just say that the issue was.
  • Alt text needs sorting

Rambo's Revenge (talk) 16:02, 1 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Much better, and I thoroughly advocate not putting summaries in until after the episode has aired and it can be written in someones own words. Additionally, for the topic, can you make sure List of 30 Rock episodes addresses these copyvio issues past episodes, and blank summaries for future episodes. Good work, Rambo's Revenge (talk) 16:45, 4 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]