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The list was promoted by User:Matthewedwards 18:59, 15 November 2008 [1].

List of Marmalade Boy chapters

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previous FLC (21:59, 24 May 2008)

I am renominating this list as I believe it meets all of the FLC criteria. Everything is well sourced with reliable references, the lead is comprehensive and provides the relevant details normally found in a chapter list with an appropriate image in the upper right corner. It has also been reformatted to match current FLC standards of not repeating the list name in the lead. The list itself is well-formatted, comprehensive, and complete. The individual volume summaries are of a reasonable length for 200 page volumes with a fairly complex story line, with all but two under 300 words. -- AnmaFinotera (talk · contribs) 18:53, 4 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose
Resolved comments from Gary King (talk) 20:18, 4 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Wataru Yoshizumi; the first premiered" – "Wataru Yoshizumi. The first chapter premiered"
  • "released February 20" – "released on February 20"
  • "with new volumes published monthly" – "and new volumes were published monthly"
  • "76 episode" – "76-episode"
  • "releases in in France" – "releases in France"
  • "by Grupo Editorial Vid , in" – "by Grupo Editorial Vid, in"
  • this can actually probably be completely rewritten: "The manga series is licensed for regional language releases in in France by Glenat, in Mexico by Grupo Editorial Vid , in Spain by Planeta DeAgostini Comics, in Italy by Planet Manga, and in Germany by Egmont." – "The manga series is licensed for regional language releases by Glenat in France, Grupo Editorial Vid in Mexico, Planeta DeAgostini Comics in Spain, Planet Manga in Italy, and Egmont in Germany."
  • "2002, releasing new volumes" – "2002 and released new volumes"
  • "released August " – "released on August "
  • "The cover of the first tankōbon volume of the Marmalade Boy manga released in Japan by Shueisha on December 12, 1992." – "The cover of the first tankōbon volume of the Marmalade Boy manga released in Japan by Shueisha on December 12, 1992"
  • I have yet to take a look at the summaries.

Gary King (talk) 19:59, 4 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

All fixed except the last one cause I can't tell what the change was. I made a change to it, though that hopefully fixes whatever was wrong? I completely redid the lead after it had already been copy edited, but the summaries should still pretty much be good (I hope) since its CE in April/May. -- AnmaFinotera (talk · contribs) 20:11, 4 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"that they are going to divorce" – "that they plan to divorce" Gary King (talk) 20:18, 4 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed. -- AnmaFinotera (talk · contribs) 20:25, 4 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support, sources are okay and the summaries are easy to understand by anybody who has not read the series. The lead and the image are also good.Tintor2 (talk) 17:33, 9 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Support, all issues resolved. Dabomb87 (talk) 02:32, 13 November 2008 (UTC) [reply]
Resolved issues, Dabomb87 (talk)

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

  • All chapter ranges should have en dashes.
  • "The first chapter premiered in the May 1992 issue of Ribon where it was serialized monthly until its conclusion in the October 1995 issue." Comma after "Ribon".
  • "Ginta is waiting for Miki when she gets home, where he explains what really happened back in middle school then tells her he has always loved her." Comma after middle school.
  • "Meanwhile, Ginta's partner in an upcoming tennis invitational has to drop out after injuring himself."-->Meanwhile, Ginta's partner, who is in an upcoming tennis invitational, has to drop out after injuring himself.
  • Who is Namura?
  • "but Yuu agrees he will not tell, though wonders if Miki knows"—Missing pronoun.
  • "Furious at Ginta for telling some"—Some what?
  • "Despondent over Miki, Ginta plays terribly in the tournament and they are close to losing until Miki returns. With Miki back, Ginta and Yuu make a come from behind victory."-->Despondent over Miki, Ginta plays terribly in the tournament. His team is close to losing, but Miki returns. With Miki back, Ginta and Yuu come from behind to win.
  • "On the sixth month anniversary of their divorce"— "sixth month"-->six-month.
  • "After giving Miki and ultimatum about Arimi and it backfires, Ginta's guilt becomes too much for him and he tells Miki the truth."-->Ginta delivers an ultimatum about Arimi to Miki. However, it backfires; Ginta's guilt overcomes him and he admits the truth to Miki.
  • "Meiko goes to Miki's"-->Meiko goes to Miki's house.
  • "She leaves Miki's"—Same here.
  • "sneaking of"-->sneaking off
  • "Yuu also meets with Arimi who tells him that she is happy for him and waits until she is alone to cry." Comma after "Arimi".
  • "Embarrassed, Miki apologizes and quickly takes the ice cream to the front as the boy picks"—I think it should be "as the boy picks up".
  • Suzu sees the embrace thinks Miki is cheating on Yuu." Missing a word. Dabomb87 (talk) 22:57, 12 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
All fixed. Thanks! :) -- AnmaFinotera (talk · contribs) 02:00, 13 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The page ranges should have en dashes (–), not em dashes (—). You fixed everything else. Dabomb87 (talk) 02:20, 13 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Woops. Fixed :) -- AnmaFinotera (talk · contribs) 02:28, 13 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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