Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Eastern Pacific tropical storms (2000–present)/archive1

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The list was archived by PresN via FACBot (talk) 19:53:00 27 June 2019 (UTC) [1].

List of Eastern Pacific tropical storms (2000–present) edit

Featured list candidates/List of Eastern Pacific tropical storms (2000–present)/archive1

Nominator(s): Noah^Talk 02:49, 16 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because it is now a complete listing of all Eastern Pacific tropical storms from 2000–present.

For reviewers, please note this list does not contain entire sections on background and climatology as this is meant to be a child article for List of Eastern Pacific tropical storms (not created yet). The lede does contain a brief summary of what would be expected from these sections. Noah^Talk 02:49, 16 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comment - I fixed a typo on one of the storms and just was wondering, on hPa, if it is normal to use commas now. DerpieDerpie:D 02:08, 22 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"that are also located in the Eastern Pacific basin, which is denoted as the part of the Pacific Ocean north of the equator" rather wordy and I found myself stumbling over it. Try and see if you can rearrange this part of the sentence or cut down on the number of words.
"move over land" seems odd to me... given that its linking "landfall", would "reach landfall" be an acceptable alternative? (Especially because you use the word often later in the article, it would be good to have "landfall" in the lead.)
Remove the comma after "Aleutian Low" in paragraph two sentence two.
The image of the tropical storm needs alt text.
"Refs" -> "Ref."
Make the note after "discontinuous duration" a proper superscript note. It's additional information the reader may already know and it helps keep the page cleaner.
The image of the storm is the only picture on the page. I like the graph under the Landfall section but other than that the list is rather devoid of visuals. Would you be able to add some more images to the page to help illustrate the lists? (And if you do, don't forget to give them alt text!)

Other than that it looks pretty good. All the sources are acceptable. DanielleTH ^{(Say hi!)} 03:52, 26 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Withdraw I think we are going to do one massive list despite some people having had size concerns. Noah^Talk 16:23, 26 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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