Wikipedia:Featured article review/Volkswagen Type 2/archive1

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Review commentary

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  • Introduction is too brief and vague, it doesn't mention the specific models/variants at all.
  • Many stubby paragraphs that only introduce a topic without discussing it.
  • The "Variants" section is only a list and doesn't talk about each of these different types in detail.
  • An almost complete lack of references (the two that are there are done improperly).
  • Excess bolding of words.
  • The article ends "open-endedly" at the end of the history section, leaving the reader to say "so what makes these cars special?" --SCHZMO 03:20, 18 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

FARC commentary

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Main FA criteria concerns are LEAD (3a), comprehensiveness (2b), and citations (2c). Marskell 16:48, 8 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Talk message left at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Automobiles. Sandy 22:57, 16 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]