Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Ultralight Beam/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was archived by Ian Rose via FACBot (talk) 21 December 2019 [1].

Ultralight Beam edit

Nominator(s): – zmbro _(talk) 03:44, 30 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

This article is about the song by rapper Kanye West. It was released as the opening track to his 2016 album The Life of Pablo. I brought this to GA a while ago and has since been expanded more by multiple editors. It underwent a much-needed copy edit earlier this month and I believe it now meets the FA criteria. This is my first attempt at a FAC (I'm a regular over at FLC) so I'm sorry if it is not up to standards yet, but I'm more than willing to do whatever it takes to improve it. I'm looking forward to reading all of your comments and concerns. Happy editing :-) – zmbro _(talk) 03:44, 30 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Image review

File:Kanye_West_Ultralight_Beam.ogg: FUR is incomplete and needs to be strengthened. Nikkimaria (talk) 14:13, 1 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Nikkimaria I believe I've taken care of it. Please let me know if I need to do anything else. – zmbro _(talk) 17:39, 1 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Better, but think the "purpose" in particular needs some more expansion. What do readers gain by having this sample as opposed to the article simply saying it has elements of gospel? Nikkimaria (talk) 18:08, 1 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Nikkimaria Sorry I've been a bit busy irl lately. That better? – zmbro _(talk) 03:04, 5 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Yes. Nikkimaria (talk) 04:03, 5 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Coord notes

Hi, with only an image review after three weeks I'm afraid this is a bit of a non-starter, so I'm going to archive it. Given the lack of commentary, it'd be within FAC guidelines for me to give you leave to re-nominate immediately, without the usual two-week break, but I'd strongly recommend as someone new to FAC that you try Peer Review first, and/or the FAC mentoring scheme. Good luck! Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 04:50, 21 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been archived, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FAC/ar, and leave the {{featured article candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Ian Rose (talk) 04:50, 21 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.