Wmcscrooge

Any suggestion or critiques are welcome. --Wmcscrooge (talk) 21:40, 22 January 2011 (UTC)

Kevin Richardson (zoologist)

There are a variety of issues with the article. C class is a get start, but here a few things to work on: The tone of the article comes across as promotional. Terms such as "miracle" standout as not exactly encyclopedic, and in general do not come across as neutral. Next, not every paragraph needs to be its own section/subsection. And some of the headers and the section order does not match the Manual of Style (including all of its subparts), and what are the "notes" as the references section is already used for the footnotes? Those are the quick items that standout, with the tone issue being the biggest mark against it. Basically, it needs to be an encyclopedic biography, whereas what is there comes across more as a brochure. Hopefully this helps. Aboutmovies (talk) 05:00, 13 February 2011 (UTC)

Articles you might like to edit, from SuggestBot

SuggestBot predicts that you will enjoy editing some of these articles. Have fun!

Add sources Submucosa The Bourne Imperative Replica (The Outer Limits) Menuconfig The Bourne Deception The Vessel (The Outer Limits) Cleanup A Tale of Two Cities (musical) The Bourne Identity (novel) APOPO Expand ProBoards Nasal cavity The Bourne Dominion Unencyclopaedic Savannah, Georgia Abaddon (The Outer Limits) Catholic social teaching

Wikify Pamela Landy Choose Not to Fall GPS signals Orphan Frank Ruíz Strangers No Longer Kistareddypet Merge Bourne Trilogy Roman Catholic theology Phosphopyruvate hydratase Stub Lamina propria Esophageal glands Meissner's plexus Hulk and the Agents of S.M.A.S.H. Peter Folger (1617–1690) Outer Limits (band)

SuggestBot picks articles in a number of ways based on other articles you've edited, including straight text similarity, following wikilinks, and matching your editing patterns against those of other Wikipedians. It tries to recommend only articles that other Wikipedians have marked as needing work. Your contributions make Wikipedia better — thanks for helping.

If you have feedback on how to make SuggestBot better, please tell me on SuggestBot's talk page. Thanks from Nettrom (talk), SuggestBot's caretaker. -- SuggestBot (talk) 02:48, 21 October 2013 (UTC)