February 2016

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  Hello, I'm KungAvSand. I noticed that you removed topically-relevant content from Toll Brothers. However, Wikipedia is not censored to remove content that might be considered objectionable. Please do not remove or censor information that directly relates to the subject of the article. If the content in question involves images, you have the option to configure Wikipedia to hide images that you may find offensive. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about contributing to this encyclopedia. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you may leave a message on my talk page. Thank you. KungAvSand (talk) 18:10, 10 February 2016 (UTC)Reply

Hey KungAvSand,

The article is horrendously biased. Criticism as the second heading? No mention that they are on the Fortune list and Builder of the Year? I am a Canadian with no equity in this company, I'd like to make this article less biased but stay within your terms if I can. I feel that my time this morning was wasted. Someone from that Northside development got on there and cut them up (which I'm not affiliated with). You say it's not an advertising platform, but is it a place for people to complain and make unsubstantiated allegations? That's a conflict of interest. What does a building that caught fire have anything to do with a huge company?

I left the lawsuit mention in, which happened to them 10 years ago almost. The article cited this lawsuit twice so I deleted it once.

The issue with the water referred to allegations. This is a very short article there are 5 paragraphs of criticisms and 4 that are somewhat neutral for a company that is the most admired home builder on the Fortune 1000 - is that not a big deal? It does sound promotional because it is such a great company. Is the fact that it is not one of the fastest growing companies on the list also not relevant. This is what is happening to the company in 2014 and 2015.

Managing a conflict of interest

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  Hello, Tongeee. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a COI may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. In particular, please:

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Please familiarize yourself with relevant policies and guidelines, especially those pertaining to neutral point of view, sourcing and autobiographies. Thank you. KungAvSand (talk) 18:15, 10 February 2016 (UTC)Reply