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Hello, Thestrongestonehere, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:54, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

Notes

Hi! I have some notes for you on your draft:

The career and legacy sections contain a lot of content that comes across as an opinion and like it's written in favor of Onwurah and her work. These should always be attributed to the person making the claim, especially with opinions. Interpretations can sometimes be written in a more general fashion, however they must be something that is very widely held and seen to be true. Even then, they need to be written so that it's clear that it's a summary of the critics' interpretations, if that makes sense.

It's also important to make sure that this reads neutrally, as some of the content - particularly the legacy section - comes across as kind of promotional. I know this isn't your intent, but it's still necessary to be careful. I'd review the article on Alfred Hitchcock to see how his themes and motifs section is written.

That said, your sourcing looks to be very good and once you fix the attribution and neutrality issues, this should be ready to move live. I've tried to do some attribution, but it's kind of clunky as a result. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:25, 18 October 2019 (UTC)

Ngozi Onwurah

Minor revisions needed.

• Great job! Well-written and well-integrated into the existing article.
• Ensure that the writing maintains a neutral point of view throughout: i.e. first sentence in the Legacy section should be clearly attributed to the author (i.e. “According to Foster, Onwurah has pushed the limits…”), and that the second sentence is cited.
• I recommend that you add to the lead section to make it a full paragraph, as that is a standard feature of Wikipedia articles. Some guidelines here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Lead_section
• Other than that, you'll be ready to move your work to mainspace!

CropMilk (talk) 15:08, 23 October 2019 (UTC)

Overall

• Summaries are thoughtful but could be condensed and clarified
• A table may be useful in the "Awards and Nominations" section; this was suggested after I removed colons after feature titles
• The article is well resourced, and well written, as well as informative

Snapplerocks (talk) 02:06, 6 November 2019 (UTC)