User talk:TheJazzDalek/2009-11

This page is an archive of past discussions. Do not edit the contents of this page. If you wish to start a new discussion or revive an old one, please do so on the current talk page.

November 2009

Latest comment: 14 years ago2 comments2 people in discussion

Graham Parker

Hiya. You added a {{POV}} template to the Graham Parker article in September, but didn't mention why on the talk page. Was there a reason why you added it? Fmph (talk) 09:00, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

A lot of the article seems to be written like a magazine article or something. It's not egregious but could stand fixing. Phrases like "incendiary live performers", "raw onstage style", "passionate vocals", "began to change his songwriting style, reflecting his desire to break into the American market", "in a creative holding pattern", "another snapping r&b cover", "marginally less intense", "top backing bands", and "uncompromising attitude" smack of opinion rather than fact. Add in that it's all unsourced and occasionally sprinkled with weasel words and apparent original research and you have an article that really needs some attention. It's a well-written article, just not for an encyclopedia. TheJazzDalek (talk) 11:12, 28 November 2009 (UTC)

This is a Wikipedia user talk page.
This is not an encyclopedia article or the talk page for an encyclopedia article. If you find this page on any site other than Wikipedia, you are viewing a mirror site. Be aware that the page may be outdated and that the user in whose space this page is located may have no personal affiliation with any site other than Wikipedia. The original talk page is located at https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:TheJazzDalek/2009-11.