St798

Hellooooo Leo!!! Good to see you here!!

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Leave comments and feedbacks here! St798 (talk) 15:58, 6 October 2015 (UTC)

Hi Leo! These are my comments for your page thus far: The introduction and first few sections are really great! They explain your theory well and I think a nonacademic reader would be able to understand the theory based off of this. The applications section that you mentioned you worked on the most is good. You've chosen good examples to illustrate the theory and I think a reader will find these interesting. They are quite relevant. Be sure to proofread the sections when you are writing them. There are some subject/verb agreement mistakes that can be easily fixed. Also, be aware of using run on sentences. This might confuse the reader as to what exactly you are trying to say. Let me know if you have any other questions about anything. Rsp53 (talk) 14:57, 10 November 2015 (UTC)Rsp53

Hello! This is Xuejun.Andyxjbao (talk) 15:59, 6 October 2015 (UTC)Andy

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