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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:40, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

Ways to improve New Year's Sacrifice

Hello, Sonny00033,

Thank you for creating New Year's Sacrifice.

I have tagged the page as having some issues to fix, as a part of our page curation process and note that:

Please take a look at MOS:LEAD - you need to rewrite the opening paragraph, which we call a Lead. See more → The lead should stand on its own as a concise overview of the article's topic. It should identify the topic, establish context, explain why the topic is notable, and summarize the most important points, including any prominent controversies.[2] The notability of the article's subject is usually established in the first few sentences. As in the body of the article itself, the emphasis given to material in the lead should roughly reflect its importance to the topic, according to reliable, published sources. Apart from basic facts, significant information should not appear in the lead if it is not covered in the remainder of the article.

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Whiteguru (talk) 08:19, 6 May 2021 (UTC)