User talk:SRampersaud/Leadership
Latest comment: 11 years ago by A Bhagwandin
Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback
| Name of student | Wikipedia User: M.Caban |
|---|---|
| Date of review | 4/25/2013 |
| Name of editor | Wikipedia User: SRampersaud |
| URL of editor’s Userpage | Sandbox pre-edit URL http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SRampersaud/Leadership |
| Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page | 4/25/2013 |
| Date review submitted to instructor | 4/25/2013 |
| Length of edit (too long/too short) | Good length |
| Image (needed/appropriate) | If can be found, an image relating to edit will be beneficial |
| Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) | The information provided was accurate from the text book |
| Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed | Yes |
| Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) | The article information was relevant to I/O Psych and was accurate from the textbook. |
| Wikiformatting | Bullets were appropriate |
| Grammar & composition | You may want to split the first sentence. If you want you can put a period after "early". Start the new sentence with they. Example: They typically fail...
Otherwise it's good |
| Other comments | If it can be found, adding a external link would be beneficial. |
| Name of student reviewer | Wikipedia User:Aaleksanian |
|---|---|
| Date of review | 4/26/2013 |
| Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page** | Wikipedia User:SRampersaud |
| URL of editor’s Userpage | http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:SRampersaud/Leadership&action=edit |
| Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page | 04/26/13 |
| Date review submitted to instructor | 04/26/13 |
| Length of edit (too long/too short) | Perfect length |
| Image (needed/appropriate) | Might want to add an image:) |
| Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) | Very accurate |
| Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed | Yes |
| Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) | Yes |
| Wikiformatting | Nice formatting! |
| Grammar & composition | none |
| Other comments | You might want to start it differently to kind of outline what your topic will be about. |
Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback
| Name of student reviewer | Wikipedia User:MsNika349 |
|---|---|
| Date of review | 4/27/2013 |
| Name of editor | Wikipedia User:SRampersaud |
| URL of editor’s Userpage | http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:SRampersaud/Leadership&action=edit |
| Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page | 04/27/13 |
| Date review submitted to instructor | 04/27/13 |
| Length of edit (too long/too short) | Good length |
| Image (needed/appropriate) | Optional to add one. Not necessary in my opinion. |
| Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) | Accurate |
| Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed | Yes |
| Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) | Accurate to I/O Psych |
| Wikiformatting | Good format |
| Grammar & composition | Good grammar/composition One Mistake on the first word, should be Managers* |
| Other comments | good edit material. |
Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback
| Name of student | Wikipedia User: CRamel16 |
|---|---|
| Date of review | 5/2/2013 |
| Name of editor | Wikipedia User: SRampersaud |
| URL of editor’s Userpage | Sandbox pre-edit URL http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SRampersaud/Leadership |
| Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page | 5/2/2013 |
| Date review submitted to instructor | 5/2/2013 |
| Length of edit (too long/too short) | Good length |
| Image (needed/appropriate) | good job all around, image not necessary |
| Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) | The information provided was accurate. |
| Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed | N/A |
| Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) | The article information was relevant to I/O Psych and was accurate. |
| Wikiformatting | Bullets were appropriate |
| Grammar & composition | good |
| Other comments | add a external link. good work |
Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback
| Name of student | Wikipedia User: Neffateriet |
|---|---|
| Date of review | 5/5/2013 |
| Name of editor | Wikipedia User: SRampersaud |
| URL of editor’s Userpage | Sandbox pre-edit URL http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SRampersaud/Leadership |
| Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page | 5/5/2013 |
| Date review submitted to instructor | 5/5/2013 |
| Length of edit (too long/too short) | Good length |
| Image (needed/appropriate) | great job all around, image not necessary |
| Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) | The information provided was accurate. |
| Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed | Yes |
| Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) | The textbook information was accurate. |
| Wikiformatting | creative |
| Grammar & composition | No grammar issues |
| Other comments | Great job |
Name of student reviewer: Alyssa Bhagwandin
Date of review: 5/15/2013
Name of editor Wikipedia User: Wikipedia User: SRampersaud
URL of editor’s Userpage: http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:SRampersaud/Leadership&action=edit
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page: 05/15/13
Date review submitted to instructor: 05/15/13
Length of edit (too long/too short): good length
Image (needed/appropriate): N/A
Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit): information from the text was accurate
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed Yes
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych): Yes it is adherent to I/O Psychology
Wikiformatting: bulletin points were a good idea
Grammar & composition: grammar and composition was okay one or two mistakes.
Other comments: great job overall!
User:A_Bhagwandin (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 22:33, 15 May 2013 (UTC)