Rcoll23
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I think the article is very organized, and flows together good. The author gives a broad generalization of who Judy Goldsmith is then begins to talk about her life before her organization, during, and after giving us a great understanding.
The content is very clear, but I would say there are some unnecessary information and a few times where I sensed opinions. For example, in the first paragraph, second sentence, it talks about her father not being very responsible.
Also, the article is about Judy Goldsmith, not her mother so the part about her mother being discriminated against and working side by side with a man, might be a little off topic.
This article is a good example of an article that considers all perspectives. It talks about the hardships Judy went through and also the benefits after getting involved with her organization NOW.
I think the author did an outstanding job of citing their information, they went above and beyond the minimum 5 sources and cited 11 sources which all seem to be credible.
Taylorbenton (talk) 14:53, 17 March 2016 (UTC)
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