User talk:Morgandonatello/Choose an Article

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Profhanley in topic Model Page

Morgan - - These three articles look like they might need some work. I think you'll need to do a source check - - can you find 4 or 5 quality sources for the candidate you're most interested in? Reviews are okay, blogs not so much. Do a search in the library databases to find superior quality sources. ProfHanley (talk) 16:35, 5 April 2021 (UTC)Reply


Alright I just decided ditch AHS and re-envision my plan. Here's a new article I'd like to select:

Legion film 2010

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Legion_(2010_film)

Problems I can fix with this article:

- Production needs a lot of work. I could add in a development section, casting section, filming, or effects. - No Music or soundtrack


5 quality sources:

https://digitalcommons.unomaha.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=1456&context=jrf https://www1.cbn.com/inspirationalteaching/legion-is-god-still-angry https://www.crosswalk.com/culture/dvds/legion-leaves-biblical-truth-behind-11625339.html https://deepfocusreview.com/reviews/legion/ https://film.avclub.com/legion-1798164217

Let me know your thoughts! Morgandonatello (talk) 21:01, 7 April 2021 (UTC)MorgandonatelloReply

If you also want me to continue finding better sources for Sojourn: American Horror Story I can do so as well, instead of doing Legion. There just weren't very good sources overall and I found that this article had more room to work with. Morgandonatello (talk) 00:46, 8 April 2021 (UTC)MorgandonatelloReply

Feedback 4/8 edit

Okay. The sourcing looks a little spotty - - i.e. an article on the CBN (Christian Broadcasting Network) website isn't going to pass muster, probably same for Crosswalk - - these don't appear to be neutral or objective. AV Club and Deep Focus Review are marginal quality at best. Have you done a library database search or google scholar search? A cursory search on google scholar turns up a good number of scholarly articles that mention or discuss the movie. Part of the goal of the project is to get some experience doing research - - finding good sources, evaluating them, working with them etc. ProfHanley (talk) 15:23, 8 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

:== Revised Sources ==

I hear you, thank you for being so patient with me... I am really trying my best to understand what it is I need to do.

I had gotten this article from google scholar, not sure if it passed: https://digitalcommons.unomaha.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=1456&context=jrf

But I have a good feeling this one is passing muster!

http://content.ebscohost.com/ContentServer.asp?T=P&P=AN&K=505313961&S=R&D=aft&EbscoContent=dGJyMNLe80SeprY4v%2BbwOLCmsEmep69Ssqe4TK6WxWXS&ContentCustomer=dGJyMPHc8Y2549%2BB7LHjgO3p8gAA

A potential source: http://web.b.ebscohost.com.jpllnet.sfsu.edu/ehost/detail/detail?vid=14&sid=e94038c8-6729-4a14-baf2-7a4c32970a08%40pdc-v-sessmgr02&bdata=JkF1dGhUeXBlPWlwLGNvb2tpZSx1cmwsdWlkJnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZQ%3d%3d#AN=47918123&db=a9h

Another potential source: https://www.nytimes.com/2010/01/23/movies/23legion.html

Previous sources of marginal quality as back up:

https://deepfocusreview.com/reviews/legion/

https://film.avclub.com/legion-1798164217

Morgandonatello (talk) 16:05, 8 April 2021 (UTC)MorgandonatelloReply

Model Page edit

Exorcist.[1] ProfHanley (talk) 16:44, 9 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

  1. ^ Dempsey, Michael (1974-07-XX). ": The Exorcist . William Friedkin, William Peter Blatty". Film Quarterly. 27 (4): 61–62. doi:10.1525/fq.1974.27.4.04a00120. ISSN 0015-1386. {{cite journal}}: Check date values in: |date= (help)