User talk:Minebiene/Schorle

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Enfantdusoleil

Hey everyone, I added a camparison of Schorle and Spritzer at the beginning of the paragraph "Varieties" as we discussed in class. Moreover, I changed all "coke's" to cola because we should stick to one version and there actually is a wikipedia article for cola but nor for coke. Minebiene


Hi, I put in the "translated form German Wikipedia"-thing and erased some of the errors that were already corrected. I didn't find anything else to correct :) --Little it (talk) 08:12, 24 June 2017 (UTC)Reply


Hi, I deleted the template at the top of the page saying that the article was unreferenced (it was dated Decemeber 2015 so I don't think it could have been refering to our article). All looks great though, good work guys ;) Enfantdusoleil (talk) 11:54, 28 June 2017 (UTC)Reply


To Do:

- proofread the whole article and correct whatever you think needs to be corrected

- add internal and external links to your translation

→ We agreed to do it by Sunday


Everyone done proofreading?

edit

I think it's ready to be put online! :)


I've put the article online :) Somehow I couldn't insert all of the references. Maybe one of you could take a look at the Schorle article and figure out how to do it. Have a lovely week and lets hope our article does well :) ToTranslate (talk) 19:04, 26 June 2017 (UTC)Reply