Micalh
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editHi Micalh, I thought the article in your sandbox was strong. I'm assuming you were simply prepping the United States section of body worn videos. I thought each paragraph was clearly organized. I think the second paragraph could use more links. I see links spread throughout the rest of the text, but not that section. I think the last paragraph could use some more additions. I'm unfamiliar with what a primer is, so maybe a link could be added and possibly a sentence of explanation. I also feel like you could get into MLibrary's database and add some academic articles to support your text. Good work!
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editMicalh, you did a really great job at adding information to the United States section of this article. After looking at the original section of the article on the main wiki page it is clear that there was not enough information on body cams in the Unite States. The information that you added helped to give me some much needed insight into the current situation in the United States. One thing I did notice in the second paragraph where you discuss the "Law Enforcement Officer-Body Cam Act" is that your citations are a little spaced out in between the sentences and that you should cite a bit more. Also you can add some more links to other wikipedia pages. The last thing I think you should do is to add maybe to one or two more sections of the article. Great Job! Mattmorton (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 15:47, 9 March 2017 (UTC)