Since you asked for my thoughts on your page, here they are:
- The spelling is atrocious -- use a spell-checker.
- The grammar is all wrong -- use a grammar checker.
- "Jedi forums" is not a very useful reference since it is too vague, and if it is an online forum of bloggers / users, it is not at all a reliable source.
- The subject material seems awfully limited in scope -- see WP:FANCRUFT for a definition of material that may be of interest to a limited fan base, but not the encyclopedic audience at large.